What I think should happen in the end, but probably wouldn't. Anyway, what do you guys think will be the ending? Comments and critique are very welcome
Come on Sasuke, he's on his knees!! (And you're on your belly) Lol Sasuke changes outfits so many times I don't even know what he's wearing anymore, so I just took it off! Yeah, and that red/black lump floating behind him is NOT a mini volcano, it's the Akatsuki cloak (duh). And behold the magical katana - it floats by itself. Characters belong to Kishimoto.
Oh and btw,
WHY are there PLANTS growing around my toes??!
Because it's the Springtime of Youth!!! lol. mine too.
I find the shadowing for this really good (as I could never draw this well xD). This is actually how I want the manga to end.
Ok, now for the real critique.
Vision: Ah! I really like your style, the semi-realistic view of Naruto and Sasuke. I love how it looks like you painted an actual scene from the manga. I have some problems with the cloak floating though. It's very possible that it's made of waterproof material, but I'm quite against that idea. Also, Naru's clothes have quite an amount of blood on them, though he didn't suffer as serious an injury as Sasu. 4 and a half stars!
Originality: I can't say that I haven't seen/read about similar scenes before, so I'm sorry I can't give you a 5 here. 4 and a half!
Technique: Like I said in Vision, I really, really love your semi-realistic style. You've gained an instant watch from me! 5!
Honestly, this is very good. The color scheme is perfect and i love the idea of naruto and sasuke ending the fight this way, way to go with originality. The facial features are very detailed although i have some issue with sasuke's neck, it looks a little too awkward for me. I would also watch the lips on naruto, they also look weird and a little on the lopsided issue. Other then that i have to say job well done, i would just take a look at some of those few points. I like the hands but it seems to me as though the one hand one sasuke (right one) it seems as though the pointer finger is a little too long for the rest of the hand. Good job!!!!!
Well, at the moment in the manga he looks like he's on the edge of changing is mind, but it's probably just torture for his fans, because that would be WAY too easy. But his at least repenting is vital for naruto to go on so I think that he'll die saving naruto's life similar to the first time, way back when, with them both thinking he's an enemy until he actually does it. It could even happen in this arc and then naruto will go rage and will get the baddies ^_^ This artwork is the best wishful thinking ever! However I do think it's wishful thinking T_T
Aww thank you! Haha yeah I was indulging in wishful thinking...I'm sure this isn't gonna be the ending, so I decided to draw it first before Kishimoto breaks our hearts I haven't been following the latest chapters, but I don't think it's gonna end so easily either
This is awesome! The real ending could be like this... I wish it was. Well, if Sasuke returns to Konoha he'll be prizoned for quite some time but... xD Or maybe Sasuke has to die in the end D::: nooo i don't want to think that!
Haha thank you! I wish it was like this too, but it's too perfect. I don't actually think Sasuke will die, that would be too convenient for the author? Anyway, we'll know soon
I hope Naruto and Sasuke have one last good fight then Sasuke gives in and returns home with Naruto. I don't want Sasuke to die. I really don't nor do I want Naruto to die either. Love the picture though
I find the shadowing for this really good (as I could never draw this well xD). This is actually how I want the manga to end.
Ok, now for the real critique.
Vision: Ah! I really like your style, the semi-realistic view of Naruto and Sasuke. I love how it looks like you painted an actual scene from the manga. I have some problems with the cloak floating though. It's very possible that it's made of waterproof material, but I'm quite against that idea. Also, Naru's clothes have quite an amount of blood on them, though he didn't suffer as serious an injury as Sasu. 4 and a half stars!
Originality: I can't say that I haven't seen/read about similar scenes before, so I'm sorry I can't give you a 5 here. 4 and a half!
Technique: Like I said in Vision, I really, really love your semi-realistic style. You've gained an instant watch from me!
Impact: AHHHHHH...... I felt my eyes tear. ;-; 5!
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